peer feedback

Conventions of an opening scene

Sets the scene of a forest

Good

no titles

Establishing shot

Not many credits

no credits sets a mysterious scene

Specific genre conventions

Black and white

kind of not suited to a childrens audience

mysterious

not very child frendly

a bit scary/mysterious

not clear on the genre

the start is not very child like

when map shows its a lot clearer

Variety and quality of camera work

good camera work

good angles

good zoom

cheeky zoom

very good camera angles

good zoom into map

good camera use

obvious what the main focus is

Use of special effects - animation

black and white

time passing

good fades/colour

black and white

colour change

change is a bit abrupt

black and white

Sound - Quality and effectiveness

very effective sound

creepy and it fits

dialoge needed to be smoother

quite dialog, however good soundtrack

effective sound

good sound track, goes well with genre

sets the scene well

Use of Mise-en-Scene

good use of props

effective props

good use of props

Editing

very good use of black and white

sets the time period

good transitiions

good transitions, effective

good editing

Best features

black and white

when they found the map

black and white

the coulour change and zoom into map

colour and sound